Trance-tory Time Stopper by Kris P. Kreme
When Clarke’s sweet girlfriend Zoey agreed to let him try hypnotizing her, neither of them imagined hypnosis would be the least crazy thing to happen.
Shopping at a second-hand shop for a pocket watch, wanting to relive the scenes in his favorite B-movies, Clarke finds a watch the shopkeeper calls the Trance-tory Time Stopper, and the he claims it has issues so not to use it.
But when Clark swings the Time Stopper in front of Zoey, she is frozen in more than a trance, time stopped for her. And when Clarke tries the Time Stopper on himself, hoping to free her, he finds his own conscience stopped, feeling too good about doing bad things with Zoey’s frozen body.
Clarke is a pretty nerdy guy who lucked into having a very hot girlfriend the last six months. But they’ve barely done more than make out a couple of time and he knows with his luck it probably isn’t going to last. That’s at least part of the reason he finds himself in a dusty old shop, dealing with a fairly creepy old guy, wanting to buy a pocket watch.
Clarke’s girlfriend Zoey is adorably cute, very innocent, and generally the sweetest girl around. She’s gotten into the old B-movies Clarke always liked, never knowing that while she finds the hypnosis scenes in some of those movies funny, he finds them incredibly arousing.
The truth is, as hot as Zoey is, Clarke finds the idea of her hypnotized, standing stiff with wide blank eyes and an empty stare, to be even hotter. He knows she may never actually get hypnotized, but somehow she agreed to let him try. She even offered to pretend to be hypnotized, to pose for pictures looking like those helpless victims in the old movies. And Clarke knows those pictures are definitely worth the trip to a creepy old second-hand shop where he should be able to find a pocket watch.
But the man at the shop only has one pocket watch and strangely he seems more scared of it than Clarke was of the creepy old man himself. According to him, the watch he sells Clarke has issues. He warns him not to use it, especially when Clarke admits he just wants it as a prop. But the man does tell Clarke that the surprisingly nice looking silver watch is only actually ten years old, and is called a Trance-tory Time Stopper.
As Clarke takes the watch and goes back to the apartment he shares with Zoey, each of them having their own bedrooms because he remains that nerdy guy with no game, he is more than excited to finally try this little hypnosis roleplaying game she somehow agreed to. With her dressed in such a cute outfit, a revealing striped top, pleated skirt, it’s all Clarke can do to keep from showing his obvious arousal at the kinky fun.
But when Clarke swings the watch before her eyes, Zoey focusing intently on it as he rambles his way through made-up monotone instructions, how could either of them ever imagine they are starting a process neither may be able to fully escape from?
After gasping, Clarke finds his girlfriend more than merely entranced, absolutely frozen still, the watch in his hands no longer ticking. As he realizes slaps do not wake her, nor do they cause even a blemish or bruise, Clarke really begins to freak out realizing the Time Stopper somehow stopped time for Zoey. In his haste to figure out how to unfreeze her, he follows limited instructions he found in the box the watch came in, and thinks it will take using the watch the same way on himself to bring her back out of frozen time.
Yet when he swings the watch, staring at it until it begins to tick again, Clarke realizes something vastly different has been stopped within his mind… his moral conscience, his hesitation or rational restraint have been frozen completely, leaving him truly a horny guy willing to do anything with the frozen hot girlfriend he still has in front of him.
But what all perverse pleasures will Clarke find himself enjoying at taking so much innocence from Zoey? And what will happen when after seven hours the watch reverses to release his conscience back to him? How can he explain what he did or will he want to after Zoey quickly discovers something weirder than just hypnosis happened to her during that missing time?
Readers Choice Month reminds readers to stop and take the time to take those closest to you, in every way imaginable.
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